What do you think of my site? Advice please.x?

freewebs dot com/larrylemon/


I reckon it is real funny, I made it with my friend, but have a look and tell me what you think. Also show your kids if you're over 30, because I am 12 and it might be a bit too entertaining for older people.





Thanks.What do you think of my site? Advice please.x?
Not bad (and I'm 33 and get it) even managed to get the ';crypitic'; message left for you on the grepory grape site too, hope all went well at the doc's





poeple above me, dont copy and paste the addy look at how his written it and then re-do the Dot Com bit as .com and it works fine.





Looks like we have the startings of a good story teller here, work on it and kids will love itWhat do you think of my site? Advice please.x?
just tried to get to it, - it didn't work!





Sort it out, and, - I PROMISE, - I will have a look, then, leave a message, - to let you know what I think!
why didn't you add a hyperlink. I am too lazy to type it out. ha ha
it would help if the link worked